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Alexandra_Turos
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PostSubject: death lullaby   death lullaby EmptySun May 03, 2009 10:42 am

once upon a little girls dream
jumping on rocks sleeping in streams
weping under the willow tree
does she have to here the birds and bees?

crying all night, sleeping all day,
her fifteenth birthday gone away,
mommy and daddy i cant see,
loving i do know, but feeling it, it dosen't show,
this is this is the death lullaby,
this is this is good bye,

na nana nana yah
showing her face and all her prity lace
sleeping in and dreaming of that sin
and now shes gone

Crying all night, sleeping all day,

Her fifteenth birthday gone away,

Mommy and daddy I cant see,

Loving I do know, feeling it, it doesn't show,

This is this is the death lullaby,

this is this is good bye,



good bye, good bye

this is this is

something to get by with

this is this is

something to get by with

this is this is

something,

something,

oh,

this is this is the death lullaby

the is this is good bye



Crying all night, sleeping all day,

Her fifteenth birthday gone away,

Mommy and daddy I cant see,

Loving I do know, feeling it, it doesn't show,

This is this is the death lullaby,

this is this is good bye,



Crying all night, sleeping all day,

Her fifteenth birthday gone away,

Mommy and daddy I cant see,

Loving I do know, feeling it, it doesn't show,

This is this is the death lullaby,

this is this is good bye,



la lala lala lala

la lala lala la
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PostSubject: Re: death lullaby   death lullaby EmptySun May 03, 2009 11:05 am

wonderful!

Just the ending, I think you don't need to add the "lalala"s

Many songs make use of that, wouldn't that make your song be somewhat similar to theirs?
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PostSubject: Re: death lullaby   death lullaby EmptyMon May 04, 2009 12:02 am

idk i wrote it like 2 years ago....lol after my 15th b-day
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PostSubject: Re: death lullaby   death lullaby EmptyMon May 04, 2009 12:59 am

well i like it
this could be turned into a song
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PostSubject: Re: death lullaby   death lullaby EmptyMon May 04, 2009 1:00 am

Hehee Loved It!! Wink
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