the snakes vinom

Subject: the snakes vinom Wed May 13, 2009 9:56 am

You make me scram; with out delight.
I might be dieing; don’t put up a fight.

Calling tears fall off my face.
Cussing nothing, but disgrace; for you.
Coming off the surface of skin.
Is poison; like a snake’s venom.
Sinking into the dirt. (Sinking into the dirt.)
Killing everything around me.
That hurts. (That; that hurts.)

ill post more of it later

Subject: Re: the snakes vinom Wed May 13, 2009 10:15 pm

it's really interesting kitten and i love it
but i though we could only have one topic for all our poems?

Subject: Re: the snakes vinom Wed May 13, 2009 10:46 pm

its a song and where did it say that? lol others just do it that way cuz it doesnt take up room...but right noew we dont have to worry about that... Laughing